Would you like to give me feedback for "On What is a Self"

https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/9aey9ri5469ob9Pag/would-you-like-to-give-me-feedback-for-on-what-is-a-self

Hi, I’m going to publish soon here a study of CEV composed of two texts "On What is a Self" and "Troubles with CEV" Would you like to give feedback prior to publication?

If so, please provide your e-mail address and I will send you the text.

Merry Newtonmas